<editing-instruction>
Editing Instruction
Container element to hold the text that describes how an alteration or addition should be made to the standards document. These instructions are typically placed before the portion of the document to be modified.
Attributes
Model Description
The following, in order:
- <label> Label of a Figure, Reference, Etc., zero or one
- <title> Title, zero or one
- Any combination of:
This element may be contained in:
<abstract>, <ack>, <app>, <app-group>, <array>, <back>, <bio>, <body>, <boxed-text>, <caption>, <chem-struct-wrap>, <def-list>, <disp-formula-group>, <disp-quote>, <fig>, <fn-group>, <glossary>, <index>, <index-div>, <index-group>, <kwd-group>, <list>, <non-normative-example>, <non-normative-note>, <normative-example>, <normative-note>, <notes>, <notes-group>, <ref>, <ref-list>, <sec>, <statement>, <supplementary-material>, <table-wrap>, <table-wrap-group>, <term-sec>
Example 1
...
<sec sec-type="list-change">
<title>IDENTIFICATION</title>
<editing-instruction>
<p><italic><bold>Change to read:</bold></italic>
<list list-type="bullet">
<list-item>
<label>A.</label>
<p><strike>The R<sub>F</sub> value of the principal spot of
the <italic>Sample solution</italic> corresponds to that of
<italic>Standard solution A</italic>, obtained as directed
in the <italic>Procedure</italic> for <italic>Organic
Impurities</italic>.</strike></p>
<p>The retention time of the major peak of the <italic>Sample
solution</italic> corresponds to that of the <italic>Standard
solution</italic>, as obtained in the <italic>Assay</italic>.</p>
</list-item>
...
</list>
</p>
</editing-instruction>
</sec>
...
Example 2
... <sec sec-type="list-change"> <title>Terms and definitions</title> <term-sec> <editing-instruction> <p>Replace the definition of "sample definition 4.5.6" below:</p> </editing-instruction> <label>4.5.6</label> <term-display> <term>sample definition</term> <def><p>old definition</p></def> </term-display> </term-sec> <term-sec> <editing-instruction> <p>with the definition in this 4.5.6 replacement definition:</p> </editing-instruction> <label>4.5.6</label> <term-display> <term>sample definition</term> <def><p>new definition</p></def> </term-display> </term-sec> </sec> ...
Example 3
A document that contains only Editing Instructions:
<standard>
<front>
<std-meta>
<title-wrap>
<intro>MILITARY STANDARD</intro>
<main>SHIPBOARD GUIDED MISSILE LAUNCHING SYSTEM</main>
<compl>SAFETY REQUIREMENTS, MINIMUM</compl>
<full>SHIPBOARD GUIDED MISSILE LAUNCHING SYSTEM
SAFETY REQUIREMENTS, MINIMUM</full>
</title-wrap>
<std-ident>
<originator>Navy - OS</originator>
<doc-type>MILITARY STANDARD</doc-type>
<doc-number>MIL-STD-1658(OS) Notice-3</doc-number>
</std-ident>
<release-date iso-8601-date="1982-06-30">30 June 1982</release-date>
</std-meta>
</front>
<body>
<editing-instruction>
<p>To all holders of MIL-STD-1658(OS):
<list list-type="order">
<list-item>
<label>1.</label>
<p>Make the following pen and ink changes to MIL-S-1658(OS):
<list list-type="order">
<list-item>
<label>a.</label>
<p>Page ii, paragraph 2, line 3: Change "502" to "524".</p></list-item>
<list-item>
<label>b.</label>
<p>Page 2, Other Publications: Change "OR-11" and its title to "MIL-STD-648-Design
Criteria for specialized Shipping Containers".</p></list-item>
...
</list>
</p>
</list-item>
<list-item>
<label>2.</label>
<p>Retain this notice and insert before table of contents.</p></list-item>
<list-item>
<label>3.</label>
<p>Holders of MIL-STD-1685(OS) will verify that pages have been changed as indicated
above. This notice will be retained as a checklist. ...</p></list-item>
</list>
</p>
</editing-instruction>
</body>
</standard>